No Control

by LaLaROX   Aug 5, 2006


Her mind feeds off your words
what you say controls her
everything gets to her
which causes her to think
she never goes with what she believes
she see what you think
and no longer wants to be
you cause her to flee
reducing her amount of self esteem
she's losing herself
no longer following her dreams
she's wrapped in a web of gossip
she can't relate to her topics
she's considering not being worth it
she no longer even trys
their eyes are her eyes
so she always hides
how she feels inside
she's hit by everybody's sparks
that has left nothing but marks
that tore her apart

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  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    So she always hides
    how she feels inside
    she's hit by everybody's sparks
    that has left nothing but marks
    that thore her apart
    ^^loved this part, but is thore supposed to be tore?

    anyway wonderful write, lots of people can relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana77

    Enjoyed this write, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, really nicely done. Very true also, many people seem to go through life trying to be just like everyone else just to fit in.

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