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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, really nicely done. Very true also, many people seem to go through life trying to be just like everyone else just to fit in.

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana77

    Enjoyed this write, keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    So she always hides
    how she feels inside
    she's hit by everybody's sparks
    that has left nothing but marks
    that thore her apart
    ^^loved this part, but is thore supposed to be tore?

    anyway wonderful write, lots of people can relate.