Tattered and torn

by gabrielle.Xx   Aug 5, 2006


See these sticthes
they hide the broken
behind these bandaids
lies the unspoken
dont you hear me calling
out for you my dear
cant you see the sanity
i release with these tears
ill always come crawling
back into your life
dragging on a chain behind me
my heart inside a vice.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good.. i think you should continue your rhyme scheme throughout the poem instead of only a few lines.. and maybe capitalize the first letters of each line.. this was filled with emotion and flowed well.. nice job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    That was a really awesome poem.
    I'll tell ya the truth i dint understand it but i loved it, it had lots of feeling in it.
    and thanks for the comment, hope ya check more of my poems out sometime.
    well love ya bye!

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow great piece i never see you here before but seems your a good poet
    this one was so amazing keep writting
    5/5

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