Wow great piece i never see you here before but seems your a good poet
this one was so amazing keep writting
5/5

That was a really awesome poem.
I'll tell ya the truth i dint understand it but i loved it, it had lots of feeling in it.
and thanks for the comment, hope ya check more of my poems out sometime.
well love ya bye!

This was good.. i think you should continue your rhyme scheme throughout the poem instead of only a few lines.. and maybe capitalize the first letters of each line.. this was filled with emotion and flowed well.. nice job! 5/5