by xXxemzxXx Aug 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Why is my life like this |
by ALEX
Aw, hon, I'm sorry. All your poems are so sad. Try try try something happy. There must be a little something good, somewhere. Try flipping some perspectives. It'll make you a better writer to try something different. |
by Robert
The flow again was done well but the whole thing kinda mislead you on the message you wish to convey to your reader well good try though. Plot121 |