by -Ð…Ð½Ñ Ä‘Î¹ÎµÄ‘ Ñ•ÑѓεάміηÄ- Aug 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Mummy where is daddy |
by sickoflies
That was an awsome poem. 5/5 |
by X~Angie~X
Awww thats veyr very sad.. im so sorry that happened.. but i do like it. it has alot of emotions in this. i really like the flow of it all. u have talent. so keep on writing |
Wow that poem was awesome, extremely real with a sad but good story to tell, a few spelling mistakes and it got a little over repetitive after a while.. just some thoughts but overall 5/5 |
by donna
That was such a sad poem, it made me cry.. my sister's late husband took his own life leaving 3 children behind.. neway a very touching write 5/5 xx |
by Lacey Rose
Its a good poem 5\5 |