Your poem is awsome! you have a lot of talent and i'm sorry for your loss! take care now..

Its a good poem 5\5

That was such a sad poem, it made me cry.. my sister's late husband took his own life leaving 3 children behind.. neway a very touching write 5/5 xx

Wow that poem was awesome, extremely real with a sad but good story to tell, a few spelling mistakes and it got a little over repetitive after a while.. just some thoughts but overall 5/5

Awww thats veyr very sad.. im so sorry that happened.. but i do like it. it has alot of emotions in this. i really like the flow of it all. u have talent. so keep on writing
take care
luve angie

That was an awsome poem. 5/5