Just a shadow

by Tamsin   Aug 5, 2006


You could try to help me,
But you choose to ignore.
You not blind to my struggle,
You just don't care anymore.

My pain is written on my arms,
Carved deeply in blood red.
But you've got more important things to worry about,
So you push me from your head.

I'm forced to carry this alone,
This unbearable, painful weight.
You still fail to realise,
You're slowly sealing my fate.

*not my best I know -I was just venting emotion. please rate and comment*

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    I really like this poem...thank you for your comments and good luck!

    *^*crow*^*

  • 18 years ago

    by rebecca

    YOU HAVE A REALLY GOOD WAY OF EXPRESSING YOURSELF IN WRITING
    PLEASE CHECK OUT MY NEW 1 CALLED "NO ONE CAN"
    I JUST WROTE IT

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    Wow...I love that ending to that. It really sums it up. Great job. Take care. -Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Its a relli gud poem!