Heydarl a very tuching deep and sad and powerful piece. ifu need nethin email me xx

This poem made me sad. no one should go through somethin like that. great writing though, and the flow was smooth. great job.
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OMG! i love this poem.. its really good and the flow was great... awesome job!!

Not bad..A good message, but yet -again- there's just something about it I don't like...maybe too cliche? But it was strong with flow...Good job on that.

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