by kia Aug 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
If only i could tell you |
by Raydeen
I really liked it, but didn't understand why first I believe the girl was saying sorry and then she was saying how much he had hurt her. so I'm confused. but it was a good write. 5/5 |
I realy love your poem it shows so much emotion so much passion i liked how the words seemed to float together i love the sad ending too. Keep on writing your a good poet. |
by ♥?♥
IM NOT REALLY GOOD AT READIN LONG POEMS HEHE BUT I READ DIS 1 AND I THOUGHT IT WAS A GREAT POEM |