IM NOT REALLY GOOD AT READIN LONG POEMS HEHE BUT I READ DIS 1 AND I THOUGHT IT WAS A GREAT POEM

I realy love your poem it shows so much emotion so much passion i liked how the words seemed to float together i love the sad ending too. Keep on writing your a good poet.

I really liked it, but didn't understand why first I believe the girl was saying sorry and then she was saying how much he had hurt her. so I'm confused. but it was a good write. 5/5