Eternal Flame

by Melissa S. Masucci   Aug 5, 2006


Reignite the flame
Of a once roaring fire
Which, like clockwork
Weathered a little rain
And slowly
Faded
To empty coals

A downpour, but not a death
With determination
Alike none other past
With a little sunlight
The rain dries
Time heals
And the fire ignites

This flame is unique
Unlike the others before
The strength is surreal
It will not smoulder
From a little rain
It will endure
Eternal flame

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A spark can grow into a flame. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    I really loved how you changed things into this metaphor, wonderful... It really does sound correct, like eternal love is what i got out of it... wonderful job, 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Loved it. The flow was smooth the imagery was wonderful and the message inspirational.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this was a really deep and powerful poem. You really chose your words carefully, and you put them in the right places with the right pauses. Excellent job on this one.

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