by sibyllene Aug 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Why the world's treasure |
Heartbreakingly sad...brilliantly written.. |
I like it |
WOW that was totally awesome, a mind twister and blower all in on. Excellent poem, well written and vocabulary was great, love the way you expressed your thoughts and feeling in this one, very well done, keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5 |
by Cattiebrie
Wow! now that took me some time to wrap my mind around for sure. But that is what I love about your poetry, you weave with words, you challenge my imagination and you ooze creativity! Lady! you are amazing! |
by Katie
It was a little confusing for me at first, but when I read it again I realized that it had a lot of meaning. Very nice work. :] |