by Kaylee Aug 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Verse One |
by Leslie
I like this, but songs are tricky when it comes to fitting them to mucis. i have a couple of songs and now that i see you can post them i will. One thing though, just a comment and maybe you already can,. but if you want to write a really good song learn some simple guitar and get a tune going. actualkly sing the words and see if they fit. ever since i learned guitar my poetry in general has greatly improved. Knowing rythem empowers your ability to express thought artisctically. |
I didn't really understand this and it didn't seem to have much flow to it.. But the chorus was catchy enough. |
by Aline
Your poem is so cute! i LOVE it |
by gabrielle.Xx
Oh wow thats an amazing song.. really really really good.. i like the 'shes waiting for me as i descend stairs' thats a great line!! X |
by Nelle
That was soooooo sweet..it reminded me of myself though in some parts..I got a little bit confused but then I figured it out and now i understand! it was great you expressed your feelings wonderfully! great job oh and I gave you a 5 =D..keep it up! |