I could actually sing along to this one, putting in my own tune, it was really catchy and was well written, flowed well.
love Tara-Kay

These lyrics are so sweet, I loved them. They're so well written, but what I liked the most about them was the message. I can totally relate to it. Thanks for sharing them, while I was reading them, they made me feel happy. =)

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

I would like to hear it sung

Very cute and touching.. Sweet it is. A mother should be proud. Great write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very sweet poem. Reminds me of my mom.

I might be clumsy. Fall on my face,
Scratched knees from every mistake,
Been blind to love. Open to self hate,
Don't judge me now until you've heard,
At least I know I'm mama's baby girl,

^^I loved the chorus!! The great thing about your lyrics, Is that I can ALWAYS find a good tune for it, like I can sit here and sing it to myself. I love that.

Your flow in this was flawless aswel. There's not a thing I would suggest to be changed or anything, it was great the way it is. Excellent job, Kaylee. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

That was soooooo sweet..it reminded me of myself though in some parts..I got a little bit confused but then I figured it out and now i understand! it was great you expressed your feelings wonderfully! great job oh and I gave you a 5 =D..keep it up!

Oh wow thats an amazing song.. really really really good.. i like the 'shes waiting for me as i descend stairs' thats a great line!! X

Your poem is so cute! i LOVE it

I didn't really understand this and it didn't seem to have much flow to it.. But the chorus was catchy enough.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

I like this, but songs are tricky when it comes to fitting them to mucis. i have a couple of songs and now that i see you can post them i will. One thing though, just a comment and maybe you already can,. but if you want to write a really good song learn some simple guitar and get a tune going. actualkly sing the words and see if they fit. ever since i learned guitar my poetry in general has greatly improved. Knowing rythem empowers your ability to express thought artisctically.
I like this song, I hope you write more.