Aww this is so sweet. I am so glad u 2 are still together. This poem was very touching, as well yours have gotten better. Please read more of my stuff if u get a chance. thnxs bud. Miss yas...coem on the chat sumtime.

Lissa

So Sad yet so good. YOu are such a great poet.

Awww...stopit...your gonna make me cry....damn you david....you know im not amushy person....lol....aw

Awww thats so good. i relaly like it. u have so much talent.. keep on writing
i like ur poems thye have so much meaning to them
take care
angie

Aw! this was so great! u have such a great talent its amazing. it was very touching....great work! 5/5