Never-Ending Love

by myshiningstar14   Aug 5, 2006


The mold was broken when you
walked into this world, when you
loved me like no other.
Our lives suddenly collide and here
we find ourselves hand-in-hand,
holding one another to till our
timeless end.

Your heart kissed me into
something whole, something
to be told.You've given me
a chance, a second dance.

You have helped paint the colors
of my sky, just hold me
you'll know why.

The tears that ceased, the
gentleness of your never-
ending love, so wonderful.
The silence is so
loud, and I know in you
I've
found, my never-ending
love, myshiningstar.

You cleared away the
cobwebs, drank away the
pain. You've kissed the
tears, held on to a
love so dear.

You've done more than
words, more than any
kiss and tell could do.
You've drawn me back
to reality, this much
I know is true.

Never-ending love, a love so true.
Never-ending love, a love un-caressed by time.

Never-ending love, a love held by rainbow tears and a thousand nights of dancing angels.

*this is dedicated not only to my SAVIOR...who sent my my boyfriend, but to my boyfriend dave for being my second light. For helping my see the ways of the lord, AMEN....i love you sweetie.**

Lissa

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  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow if only we all had someone like that....anyways that as great again 5/5
    aunabeth

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A another great poem by a great poet, you have done a great job here,
    keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Wow this is powerfu stuff. it makes me think about stuff. nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    As Kirsten said the way you structured the stanzas has taken away from the poem a little. Try making each sentence it's own line and each stanza a statement on a separate subject to make everything fall into place.

    The sentiment and feel of the piece, however, raises it off of the screen and gives it texture.

    A nice read that needs a just a little tweaking to make it a really enjoyable one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Shane Peate

    Pretty good - I like the emotions that drove your writing but the flow was a little off I have to agree with a couple of the others, it just felt a little weird trying to read it. But overall it was a good poem 4/5.

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