by Steven Odenbreit Aug 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
When you look into my eyes, |
by Tormented
**Tear** this is was AMAZING...sooo well written!! i loved it!! the flow was very good!!You have a GREAT talent!! and cant wait for more from you!!! Loved it very much!!!5/5 |
by dora
Hey this was really beautiful very well written a heartfelt piece. beautifully worded. keep it up xx |