Crazy Beautiful Desire

by Lost & Delirious   Aug 5, 2006


Crystal star, don't blame me for trying,
My heart's been longing to ask,
For this one last wish, upon the first star
I whisper, you listen: "Please, let him be mine"

One magical second, the right time and place,
Tomorrow fate could bring us together,
The distance existing between us would fade,
A whole new world, to share with my love.

His kiss would be the end of everything I know,
The beginning of a universe I would willingly adore,
This may never happen, but today's only a wish,
A hysterical illusion, a crazy beautiful desire,

We are all victims of our precious fate,
But, could fate be kind and give me his love?
As I walk away from you, crystal star shinning,
I can't wait for tomorrow...maybe he'll be mine.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa25

    That was really great you must be a natural thank u for ur comment it gave me a change to see ur work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    "A whole new whole new world, to share with my love."

    I think in this line, you reapeated your words:P But wow...this posme was amasing, it didn't rhyme, but it still sucked me in and kept my attention, you truely are a talented writter, amasing work.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Very cute, I like this poem alot:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    This poem was somethin different, but i think you did a great job with it. its well composed, and really caught my attention. great job. 5/5
    Driver

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