This poem was somethin different, but i think you did a great job with it. its well composed, and really caught my attention. great job. 5/5
Driver

Very cute, I like this poem alot:)

"A whole new whole new world, to share with my love."

I think in this line, you reapeated your words:P But wow...this posme was amasing, it didn't rhyme, but it still sucked me in and kept my attention, you truely are a talented writter, amasing work.

--Steph

That was really great you must be a natural thank u for ur comment it gave me a change to see ur work!