Riddled With Doubt

by Twisted Heart   Aug 5, 2006


Cry me a river
for I've cried one for you.
Each tear that was shed
broke my heart right in two.
From the depths of my soul
a teardrop was heard,
It spoke many volumes
without saying a word.
My heart at deaths door
I was riddled with grief.
I found no solace
No form of relief.
My hope and my trust
was put on display,
and I grieved their passing
when they left me that day.
So cry me a river
and maybe I'll find,
some small consolation
in my skeptical mind.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    You have a talent
    this is just amazing i never read so many poems by one author you kept me interested i think this is cool and its exciting cause im in love with poetry
    nice job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Cry me a river - that's such a profound way of expressing the depth of grief. beatiful verse.

    love and hugs
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "broke my heart right in two."

    In this line I think you should take out the word 'right'. It will flow alot better.
    Also, a couple of your lines ran together so you need to edit it. It's this line:
    "I was riddled with grief. I found no solace,"

    Other than those two things, the poem is flawless. Lots of uncharted emotion and beautifully written. Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by estefani

    VERY NICEEEEEEEEEEE !!! I LOVE IT .

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