Cute cute cute poem..
i luv it..
great poem,

This is really sweet and inspirational. I love the imagery it is really strong.
Nice job keep it up.

Wow.. wen i read this.. my heart started pounding.. wicked.. really good writing does that to me.. and you are a GREAT writer!! im gonna put u in my fav's cuz i luv your work!! keep it up... !

:'(
That's really sweet but sad at the same time... I like it a lot though, the flow and rhyming is excellent. Great work 5/5
- Polly

PS - I don't know if you commented on my poems because you the saw the thread in the forums that I would double the comments, or you just saw my poems lol... I will comment 4 anyway but I haven't enough time now so I will do it tomorrow if thats Ok!