Comments : No Need to Worry

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    AMen Brotha! Thats amazing! I believe in everything you just said..Im a christian and we sing songs like that all the time! Wonderfully written!
    -Krissey

    P,S would appreciate if you read Painted Cardboard Shoes

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    When the wind blows against your heart,
    And you don't know where you are,

    These are my favorite lines.. They're very strong and they tell so much with just a few lines. This poem is really good... So strong and loving. Great job. God is proud, I'm sure. =)

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by jeff

    Great write

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni

    Very good!! Wow. I loved it. It sounds like you're either describing a close friend or God. or both.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Great jo and great poem! i like the flow it was so great, i think its written well so just keep on writing and i believe u can write more... 5/5

    god bless

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohmygod. That poem was amazing. It was so beautifully written. I thought you did a great job, the flow was perfect. I only found one error.

    "You can always rest you head awhile"

    Should be.

    "You can always rest your head awhile"

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Aww 5/5 GREAT POEM! your a talented writer. And thank you for commenting Battle to love eachother!

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Beautiful poem...Thats a very cute poem, it's such a pleasure to read. I loved your wording and the ending:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fairytales

    Amazing... It's an awesome poem, definitely one of the best I've ever read! *hugz* Hope to see more of your work soon!

  • 18 years ago

    by nering

    Hey um i would love to chat if you would e-mail me at willwonme@yahoo.com!

  • 18 years ago

    by Leslie

    Hey, this is good. I really liked it. I usually have issues with people who use their poetry to preach but this is so simply just your opinion. I dont kow how to word it, but it's just nice to read. The voice of your words sound so steady, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by kaydee

    That's awsome how you write...its beautiful poem... i love it.. well take care.... much love kaydee

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Hmm. This was quite inspirational.. The flow was pretty good, the emotion clear, and the descriptions worked well.. Nicely done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very beautiful. Full of inspiring words to describe God. 5/5

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    U r a rele good writer ... and this one i like the most ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Wonderfully written, but what about people who have no faith?

    this is my favourite so far.

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    I liked this one alot, it had some real meaning behind it and everything i read right now jsut makes me miss my grilfriend more and more, i think i should go to bed, haha 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    This poem is awesome! i can really feel the passion and strength of your faith and friendship with God and it really shines through your poem. an amazing piece of work! thankyou. xXx