by Krissey
AMen Brotha! Thats amazing! I believe in everything you just said..Im a christian and we sing songs like that all the time! Wonderfully written! |
When the wind blows against your heart, |
by jeff
Great write |
by Jenni
Very good!! Wow. I loved it. It sounds like you're either describing a close friend or God. or both. |
by Sweet lig
Great jo and great poem! i like the flow it was so great, i think its written well so just keep on writing and i believe u can write more... 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
Ohmygod. That poem was amazing. It was so beautifully written. I thought you did a great job, the flow was perfect. I only found one error. |
Aww 5/5 GREAT POEM! your a talented writer. And thank you for commenting Battle to love eachother! |
Beautiful poem...Thats a very cute poem, it's such a pleasure to read. I loved your wording and the ending:) |
by Fairytales
Amazing... It's an awesome poem, definitely one of the best I've ever read! *hugz* Hope to see more of your work soon! |
by nering
Hey um i would love to chat if you would e-mail me at willwonme@yahoo.com! |
by Leslie
Hey, this is good. I really liked it. I usually have issues with people who use their poetry to preach but this is so simply just your opinion. I dont kow how to word it, but it's just nice to read. The voice of your words sound so steady, good job! |
by kaydee
That's awsome how you write...its beautiful poem... i love it.. well take care.... much love kaydee |
by Jessica
Hmm. This was quite inspirational.. The flow was pretty good, the emotion clear, and the descriptions worked well.. Nicely done! 5/5 |
Very beautiful. Full of inspiring words to describe God. 5/5 |
by -Usmi-
U r a rele good writer ... and this one i like the most .. |
by Hear You Me
Wonderfully written, but what about people who have no faith? |
by shawn
I liked this one alot, it had some real meaning behind it and everything i read right now jsut makes me miss my grilfriend more and more, i think i should go to bed, haha 5/5 |
by becca
This poem is awesome! i can really feel the passion and strength of your faith and friendship with God and it really shines through your poem. an amazing piece of work! thankyou. xXx |