by .::Lovely*Letdown::. Aug 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Living my same old stone cold lie is starting to seep through more than just my shallow skin, freezing the unsteady beating of my once vulnerable heart. |
by broken angel
Excellent write, I really enjoyed this poem because I can really relate, but then again, who can't? and that's what makes this poem SO great! Everyone feels invisible, more than others, but we all have that feeling some point in our life. I also like that you kinda (I think you were @ least) conveyed the idea don't judge by the outside skin, you don't know me. I've been judged my whole life so I can sorta relate. 5/5 for sure!!! |
by lexie
Just another smile to hide the tears. |
Great job on this. It was very well written and it sent a very strong message out. It was like a don't judge before you get to know somebody first message. But yeah, i really loved it...you're pretty good for only 14. Keep up the great work darling. |
Dear..you're invisible to NO ONE! you may think that, but whoops, not true. People see in you, not because they see right through you, not because your invisible, but because they look deep into you. They aren't looking past you, they are looking in you. Love you forever and a day |