Very nice, but it's just an advice that almost nobody can take..

I think this is really good.if someone is feeling down and they read this poem im sure they will have pride for themselves.

I really like this. The message behind it is vivid and clear. I think you could have expanded the emotion in your stanza's, and maybe elaborated on them to make them longer. However, a very enjoyable read.

Aww. this was awesome. i loved it hun

much love and many kisses,
bex