The poem was pretty good as far as rhymes and content are concerned. You might want to limit the times you use the word need though. I loved how "love" felt like a child. Your description about the wall flower too.

I loved that poem, it was really well written, very loving but sad, keep writing
the only thing i found wrong was the second line of the first stanza,
"I try so hard to make IN go away"
it should be "I try so hard to make IT go away"
common mistake.
love Tara-Kay

Very good poem, I like the ending very well, and I like the title alot.

This was pretty good.. the descriptions were good.. but i felt that the repitition of "I" so much ruins the flow a little bit.. try and use it less as it gives much more power to your words.. 4/5