Deicated to Jesse.

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Aug 6, 2006


â?¥Letting the soft rippled waters
Float away to meet the other side
Letting the sunset colored sky
Fade away to meet the other world
Allowing the moon to come out
And sparkle against the waters
Allowing nightfall to meet the rocks
And letting holes to hide in the shadows
Only if you were here
To see all this happen
Holding eachother
Letting these moments fade into memories
Of what we couldve shared together
Only if you werent so far away
Because I know without you
Nothing will complete me or my worldâ?¥

-I wrote this while I was in Cave In Rock, Illinois. A beautiful place!-

Note: He left me a long time ago and I was heartbroken by it. I wrote this when me and him were still together.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow thts really good......i told you im not harsh!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Aww that was sooo sweet i can definitely relate to this alot...it was filled with tons of emotions..your description was amazing..i loved it definitely 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    Overall this poem was good. we can see the emotion put into it. good job.
    Driver

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Nice... the words you used were great and made me imagine the poem beautifully...

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Absotively beautiful. I loved the imagery, it was almost like i was there!

    5/5
    _allanah

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