What i appear

by Georgia   Aug 6, 2006


Nothing is what it appears
slowly my heat is begging to tear
as i smile and grin
in my books crying is a sin
as i begin to fall
no one notices, no one at all
with long sleeved shirts
and mini skirts
did you notice i was not alright?
or do only care that I'm out of sight?
My reducing weight
and growing scars
have you noticed the warning signs?
or do i appear fine?
some one needs to save me before its to late

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  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Im not a girl but even i can relate to this, that means its very well writen :') i thank you for writing it.

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey this is soooooo sad, i hope its not about you, well written.
    good job, n if you ever need to talk you know where i am.
    xxoo mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Nope no myspace. Mom wont allow it! I know exactly what you mean. Sometimes when I'm alone the only thing that keeps me going is my teddy bear. I hold her and dont let go.. I take her everywhere! Shes caught my every tear. I dont think its stupid at all! Do whatever you have to, to hold on. Thats all it really is about! Survive. Survive... and you'll be ok.
    Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Yet another great poem keep it up
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    O wow i read this and was like holy this is like i am writing it. i kno how u feel.. cuz this is like my life but someone else living it. does htat make sense? well if it doesnt sorry. but i can relate to this so much.. ne wyas amazing poem. i love it. but it makes me sad... keep on writing and i wil keep reading. if u ever wana talk email me ok..
    take care
    luve angie

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