I likied it alot..in the last stanza u got kinda off the title and main plot but i can tell its a metaphor..but u have to kinda reread it since i didnt wwrite it its harder to understand the whole bullseye/target thing..all together id give it a four..the flow was great tho and i loved the plot and creativity...
love ya lots,
sore

This is sad. Check the 8th line in your first para. Spell check. Other than that i like it. 5/5
-Kakashi