Poems like this shouldnt be dissed and people shouldnt say how to improve.

Because its your poem and comes from the heart if someone else tells you what to write on it then it wouldnt be your poem would it if you know what i mean

lovely poem though very detailed xx

would you look at my poems please thnx xxx alex xxx

I love you poem. all of them. You're really good at it. Keep it up.

Megan