Jeez...that's INTENSE...wow...i loved it! I really liked the part where you said...

"The loving hate is now a hated love"

That part REALLY got to me and made me think...i REALLY enjoyed this poem! GREAT JOB!! 5/5 :)

--*--ScReAm YoUr HeArT OuT--*--

This was greatly written. the flow doesnt disrupt at all. great job.
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Wow. Why is it that everytime i read one of your poems I am absolutely hooked and want to keep on reading more? Wow. You are quite brillaint with your words. You paint a beautiful picture everytime, no matter what the topic is :)

NEVER stop writing.