If i could fly

by tiffany   Aug 6, 2006


If i could fly
i would help others.
sisters and brothers.
life would be better.
i would be like a feather.
floating as light as can be.
there would be so much to see.
i would never need my knees.
just like the bees.
high in the trees.
heven here i come!
everything feels numb.
land is beautiful, nice, and calm.
everythings perfect as can be!
i can just be Me!
my family, here i come!
ohh, if only i could fly...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    You are a true individual

    this is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.

    this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin

    lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx

    would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx

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