Cutting

by xxSilent Tearsxx   Aug 6, 2006


Flowing slowly down her arm,
Causing herself only more harm,
She hates her life there’s no point in living,
Outside she kept giving and giving.
One day she did it, she went too deep,
Now she’s in an ever long sleep.

wrote this when i was a noob at poetry, please comment.

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  • Great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by hannah

    LOVED IT
    XXXXXXXXXXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    I liked it, very deep but very short, it is hard to make a short poem that tells so much, good work dahling, keep writing!
    xoxoxo Lucy