by xxSilent Tearsxx Aug 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
"Forget his name ;; Forget his face ;; Forget his kiss and warm embrace. Forget the things he used to say. Remeber now, he's gone away. Forget the things he used to do ;; Forget the shit he put you through. Forget the love you once shared. Forget the fact that he once cared. Forget the way he said your name. Remember now, things aren't the same. Forget the talks you once had. Forget the thought...It makes you sad. Forget that you said you would wait. Remeber now, his love is hate. Forget him when they play your song. Forget you once cried all night long. Forget he said he'd never leave. Remember now, he's gone forever." |
by MiseryGirl
Amazing |
by MiseryGirl
That's just perfect... I love it. It's very good. |
OH! How could you break the rhyming scheme -at the end-? Never never! I'd go back and change that, for that shot the whole poem down.. Otherwise it was really good and -had- excellent flow. |