Comments : Forget

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    OH! How could you break the rhyming scheme -at the end-? Never never! I'd go back and change that, for that shot the whole poem down.. Otherwise it was really good and -had- excellent flow.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by MiseryGirl

    That's just perfect... I love it. It's very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by MiseryGirl

    Amazing