No More!

by jessica   Aug 6, 2006


The story of our relationship is tragic,
I thought what happened between us was magic.
I have to except the fact that your not coming back,
But it's something that I lack.
I saw you with your new girlfriend,
And realized the problems with us, we can't mend.
I need to get over you,
But it's so hard to do.
I don't want to give up my chance,
For us to rekindle our romance.
But deep down inside,
Where my problems I like to hide.
I know that you and I won't work out,
But there is still that little doubt.
There will always be that moment that I see you,
And my heart will stop and I won't know what to do.
But then I will look away,
And try to make it through another day.
If there is ever a time I am all you see,
Just remember you don't love me!

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start, here's my critique:

    Your rhymes sound forced.

    Don't use fill words too much such as "I", to, a, etc.
    Add more creativity and imagery.
    Work on the flow
    Expand your vocab

    Hope that helped!^-^