This

by Drew Gold   Aug 6, 2006


Dim spin tan-gical whim
adrift from your lips
it soothes it breathes it
sucks life doesn't
leave

soft spike stuck
into the seam

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Man this is dang bang!! Trully 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Bit crazi but good 4/5

    would you read my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxx :):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Mmmmm!
    Thats just delightful, I admire how you can do so much with a few mere words. I wish I could express my self in such short space, and have such an impact. No crits, cant crit you, damn you....
    Wonderful once more.

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