Drizzling Dewdrops [Haiku]

by Jessica   Aug 6, 2006


Gently tumbling down
Silvery droplets trickle
Softly caught by leaves..
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Haiku:
Japanese style short poem of 3 lines, about nature or with a seasonal theme. Syllable count of 5-7-5.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Netta

    This haiku was amazing I wrote haikus all during school and I love yours. Please view my work and tell me what you think

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I love the imagery that you used in this. very imaginative. I think the second line was my favorite... but it was all very well written. I know I can't write a haiku, so I'm very jealous.. lol. But you did a great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    I love the Haiku style! it inspires me alot

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hehe. I loved the Imagery Haiku's give when people who know how to write well write one. I loved this poem. Reminds me a fall or summer morning. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Ooooh, a Haiku. Lovely job on this, Jessy. It was absolutly{sp?} beautiful. =D

    I find it SO hard to comment haikus, cause they're so small, tehe. But, I do know that this was amazing. Like usual, I loved it. =D 5/5

    Natalie``