A lovely Haiku Jessy, really well thought about. keep writing. i love your poems
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I loved the imagery in this. beautiful and sweet.

Wow..short but beautiful. Nicely written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I liked this, i love haikus, they are always so short, but so beautiful, you did very well on this poem, great work.

--Steph

Good poem you must be like the most popular poet on this site so id love you to look at my work and tell me how 2 it like yours?

Great job. i think you can write these very well.
Driver

Awww... it's all soft and light

Nice one, very well written

Ooooh, a Haiku. Lovely job on this, Jessy. It was absolutly{sp?} beautiful. =D

I find it SO hard to comment haikus, cause they're so small, tehe. But, I do know that this was amazing. Like usual, I loved it. =D 5/5

Natalie``

Hehe. I loved the Imagery Haiku's give when people who know how to write well write one. I loved this poem. Reminds me a fall or summer morning. :]

I love the Haiku style! it inspires me alot

I love the imagery that you used in this. very imaginative. I think the second line was my favorite... but it was all very well written. I know I can't write a haiku, so I'm very jealous.. lol. But you did a great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

This haiku was amazing I wrote haikus all during school and I love yours. Please view my work and tell me what you think