by goddess-glamourpuss Aug 6, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
for kids
Step inside my parlor |
by Jenni Marie
Haha, I liked this..well apart from the spider *shudders* I thought it was very well thought out, and I liked the last stanza. |
by Tara Kay
Loved it! it was funny, witty and kinda cute too. thank you for sharing this one with me, i loved it! |
by Natalie
HAHA! Awe! This was cool, Lol. Loved the start though, made me kinda hungry. =P |
I really liked this poem...it was so well written. You did an amazing job with this...I sometimes wish I could pull off poems of this nature. Great job. |
Im sure ive alread commented on this poem lol but i wil again lol its really good you have some imagination |