This poem is so well layed out and i liked it loads i lovep oems like this :):) they make me smile :):)
would you look at my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxx

Awww that's so awesome! I don't know why but I loved it. Just simply loved it.. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Im sure ive alread commented on this poem lol but i wil again lol its really good you have some imagination

I really liked this poem...it was so well written. You did an amazing job with this...I sometimes wish I could pull off poems of this nature. Great job.
5.5
Breanna

HAHA! Awe! This was cool, Lol. Loved the start though, made me kinda hungry. =P

Funny, funny poem. Which I enjoyed alot. Made me smile, and laugh, which I needed. A great write indeed. Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

Loved it! it was funny, witty and kinda cute too. thank you for sharing this one with me, i loved it!

Haha, I liked this..well apart from the spider *shudders* I thought it was very well thought out, and I liked the last stanza.