Raindrop (Haiku)

by goddess-glamourpuss   Aug 6, 2006


Bright water droplet
Slowly slides against cool glass
Dissolves clean away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aline

    I dont know , i didnt get it. i can't vote for it, i'll check out another one

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. thats so pretty.. the words you used are full of meaning and beauty.. and all the syllable counts work! lovely job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    You do a great job with haiku the way they are meant to be written - about ordinary aspects seen in life.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This poem looked a little lonely, tehe.

    It was a really nice haiku. But I do agree with the person above, the last line just didn't sound right. It could just be me though. Otherthan that though, it was a great haiku. All the syllable counts were right and it had great imagry. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I didn't really.. Feel.. the last line... to me it somehow didn't match up.. But all the lines where good in their own way.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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