Awww.. that was beautiful hun! the imagery was stunning and all the syllable counts work! great job 5/5

Another simular poem as the one ive just read this must be your favourite way of writing :):) nice work xxx alex xxx

You're very good with Haiku's... It was strong and brought good imagery to mind.. Great write.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

A beautifully written haiku.One can see the images and meaning in this.

Since the form is short you need strong powerful statements to make the poem work. The use of, "Fragile" and, "serenly" give it this grea calming effect while the words, "Fall" and "Petals." give off imagery that would stick in the reader's mind.

Niiiice. I noticed you used words that start with "F" at the start of each line, not sure if that was on purpose or not, but I liked it.

Another great job. Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

I really like this. I can feel the delicate petals from your short description. Good job!

A delightful Haiku. Thanks!

Different, i like it

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nada

I love haikus ! all I can say is FAVORITES!!!