Volcano

by goddess-glamourpuss   Aug 6, 2006


Volatile mountain
Docile magma filled giant
Erupts with fury

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Very good yet again lol. Short, but it definately means something. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Great example of a haiku. A plus.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oooh, woweee. This was amazing, I'm guessing it's a haiku? ..Well, I thought it was done really well. Excellent vocab!! Just great. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Bit short but good metaphor

    would you read my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxxx :):):)

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Lol wow... Very short, but it says quite something. Good imagery.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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