Lol wow... Very short, but it says quite something. Good imagery.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Bit short but good metaphor

would you read my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxxx :):):)

Oooh, woweee. This was amazing, I'm guessing it's a haiku? ..Well, I thought it was done really well. Excellent vocab!! Just great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Great example of a haiku. A plus.

Very good yet again lol. Short, but it definately means something. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha