by Kellie Aug 6, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Down by the beach the trees shall blow |
by LadyPearl
Great job! Nice descriptions. THe only changes you can make is capitalizing the first letter of each line and the "I". |
Bvery cute i really liked it :):):):) would you comment on some of myp oem plz thnx xxx alex xxx |