Your a great poet! i can relate so much to this poem! you should have shown people these a long time ago keep up the great writing :)
xXxkelliexXx

This is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.

this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin

lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx

would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx

WOW!! This was great! How did you think of this? I wish I was this good but I'm not! lol! Well rate and comment!
{*LACEY*}