Broken Euphoria

by Absinth Eyes   Aug 6, 2006


With barely a motion, his voice reaches into her chest
And extracts the remnants of her broken heart
Her veins suddenly chilled, her chest gaping with air
The last of her soul dripping down

With her heart in his hands, he feels not a touch
It beats faster in the glare of his eyes
He watches the memories, slicing through, cutting open
Leaving scars and tears in the landscape of it's surface

She breathes in the air that tastes of sulfur
The fire within knows no fuel, no need to burn
Her soul filling her lungs too slow, too black
And discard this trophy, her life, in his wake

Laying on the floor is the corpse of pergection
Her heart blackened and still on the floor
Her demon places his gun in her hand
And it leaves her heart, drenched in tragedy, willing to beat no more...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I really enjoyed reading your poem, I even read it twice. My favorite lines were these:

    With barely a motion, his voice reaches into her chest
    And extracts the remnants of her broken heart

    I loved the descriptions, they were original and gave a strong meaning to your poem. Your word choice was excellent, I love it. And the title really caught my attention.

    Great job!

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    OMG this was awesome. The whole thing left me breathless and broken.
    It was like watchig a film you expressed everything so vividly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    To be honest! it was a really good poem! you deed a good job on it!

    I loved this part:
    "With barely a motion, his voice reaches into her chest"

    5/5 keep it up!!!