My one and only

by saada   Aug 6, 2006


Baby
i dont know what to do
im lying here all alone
without a single clue

i dont know whats goin to happen
in our life ahead
but i know one thing for sure
your my only friend

i love you so dearly
you might not belive its true
to feel this way
about someone like you

im the luckiest girl in the world to have someone as sweet as you
all mine forever and ever
never have i thought bout anyone the way i have bout you
i love you zouzou
your the only love i knew

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  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Lovely poem :):):)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Sweet poem, but it can be better. Here's my critique:

    -Recheck your spelling
    -Please capitalize your "I".
    -Try to even out the lines so it flows better
    -Use fill words less such as "I", a, etc.
    -Add more imagery and expand your vocab, don't use the same words over again.

    Hope that helped^-^

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    I like dis poem lots..
    its so cute..

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