Save me

by dustinl90   Aug 6, 2006


On these hands and knees I'm crawling.
I'm suffering from the loss of you.
With these broken wings I'm falling.
Please help,please save me.

This pain is overwhelming.
Please baby I need you back.
I'm fading and quickly suffering.
Please help me please save me.

I'm watching a bleak red sky.
I see your face in the clouds.
"please come back", I cry.
Please help me, please save me.......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Now htis poem of yours really shows emotion and stress about the loss of a loved one and you conveyed so much meaning here well done :):):) nice work xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Hm. Well this was sweet. Maybe you should correct the I\'m's though.

    I'm watching a bleak red sky.
    I see your face in the clouds.
    "please come back", I cry.
    Please help me, please save me.......

    Lovely ending. It would be nice to have it a bit longer, though it's okay. Excellent to read.
    5/5

    xx.N-G-C-S.xx

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